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« on: August 08, 2007, 06:44:16 PM » |
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I asked Neonwizard for his opinion first before suggesting this. OK granted. Thanks Neon.
How about we write a book called the Mega Murder Mystery. Jill.
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« Last Edit: August 08, 2007, 06:47:57 PM by neonwizard »
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« Reply #1 on: August 08, 2007, 06:47:13 PM » |
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Each person writes ONE sentence.
The sea was pounding against the rocks as a scream was heard from the house on the cliffs.
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« Reply #2 on: August 08, 2007, 07:09:54 PM » |
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The gulls flew into the rising wind at the sound.
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« Reply #3 on: August 08, 2007, 08:41:54 PM » |
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Suddenly, from behind the house a dark figure appeared, staggering from side to side.
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« Reply #4 on: August 08, 2007, 11:07:38 PM » |
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It was Egor the one legged gardener carrying what looked to be a knife dripping with blood.
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« Reply #5 on: August 08, 2007, 11:14:33 PM » |
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As I looked more closely, I realized it was one of our glorious leaders.....Jimbob !!
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« Reply #6 on: August 08, 2007, 11:22:38 PM » |
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Yes and Jimbob having changed his name only that day to Egor and slicing off his right leg just below the knee to throw the whirly Detective Kluso off his track before being literally spotted by a seagull euwww !
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« Reply #7 on: August 09, 2007, 12:20:34 AM » |
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Egor climbed the steps to the clifftop house, went into the study and closed the door.
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« Reply #8 on: August 09, 2007, 12:24:34 AM » |
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In the distance you could hear a dog mournfully howling.
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« Reply #9 on: August 09, 2007, 01:16:44 AM » |
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The smell of fresh blood coming on the wind had reached its nostrils, bringing with it, recognition.
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Don't take the fence down, until you know the reason it was put up
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« Reply #10 on: August 09, 2007, 01:43:21 AM » |
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The harbour below the house was large and sheltered from the open sea by two huge stone breakwaters.
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« Reply #11 on: August 09, 2007, 07:43:55 AM » |
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After what seemed like hours Egor came out of the study and slowly hopped down towards the harbour.
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« Reply #12 on: August 09, 2007, 09:55:35 AM » |
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The dog, attracted by the blood, crept silently after him.
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« Reply #13 on: August 09, 2007, 01:30:25 PM » |
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A blonde with wind blown hair watches from behind the breakwater.
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« Reply #14 on: August 10, 2007, 08:02:56 AM » |
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Detective Kluso sent earlier to investigate rumours of strange events of the small seaside community of "Hell’s Bay" decided it was time for him to set out and start his investigation of the house on the cliff known as ”The Fishman’s Cabin”.
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« Reply #15 on: August 10, 2007, 08:03:36 AM » |
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As he came a upon the cabin he noticed the front door ajar, slowly pushing the door aside and torch in hand he wandered deliberately though what seemed to be the living room and noticed a sweet sickly smell that turned his stomach almost immediate.
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« Reply #16 on: August 10, 2007, 08:04:04 AM » |
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Kluso could see blood droplets on the bare wooden floor leading him to the kitchen as if the tracks were a deliberate act.
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« Reply #17 on: August 10, 2007, 08:06:04 AM » |
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Detective Kluso put his hand on the swinging kitchen door slowly pushing it open, the smell was just a about overwhelming him until he seen what was on the kitchen table, It was a young women slit from the top of her chest to the top of the pubic bone, her skin was splayed open like a student’s frog dissection exercise in high school, but this was much more insidious, the perpetrator of this horrendous crime had extra blood supplies and other life saving equipment to prolong the life of his victim.
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« Reply #18 on: August 10, 2007, 08:06:30 AM » |
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Kluso now knew that this was not going to be a easy case and that he was up again a person who took pleasure in his demented acts.
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« Reply #19 on: August 10, 2007, 08:10:37 AM » |
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"CUT"!! called the Director.
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